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Chapter 5 - "Alien Technology"

Voting ended 6/23/2008

Chapter 5 - "Alien Technology"

The Girl - Erin Lanphere; Tony - Les Lanphere; Robert Applecroft - Brant Gallegos; Cameraman - Les Lanphere/Brant Gallegos; Director/Editor - Les Lanphere

Scoring

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Comments

6/18/2008 at 8:52 a.m. by patrickbeeson

This video needs to win this round. Really. It's so much better than anything else posted in the previous rounds.

6/18/2008 at 9:38 a.m. by ThatsWhatSheSaid

I don't know, the whole "Force Field / Energy Gun Suitcase" thing just seems so overdone lately.

I kid, I kid. Great work!

6/18/2008 at 9:58 a.m. by jqutk

Great effects, great video..... so that probably means some other lame clip will win unfortunately

6/18/2008 at 9:58 a.m. by joshutk

Nice! Obviously well thought out and great use of those effects.

Favorite part: Robert's entrance with the blown out background.

6/18/2008 at 10:42 a.m. by markymark

this gets my vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

6/18/2008 at 10:49 a.m. by davidmoon

Super awesome!!!

6/18/2008 at 11:36 a.m. by trader

Great video! This will be hard for other teams to follow for sure.

6/18/2008 at 11:43 a.m. by ScoresEasy

Seriously good entry.

6/18/2008 at 11:46 a.m. by ellicip

seriously, this is awesome!

6/18/2008 at 11:52 a.m. by mom_of_one

Awesome video! Love where this is going! Can't wait to see the finished product.

6/18/2008 at 1:27 p.m. by killerrobotninja

I felt it was time to really sit down and confront one of this site's biggest problems...

The blatant lack of super-hot alien chicks.

You're welcome!

6/18/2008 at 1:58 p.m. by davidmoon

This totally blows away my shadow puppet entry I was going to submit ...

6/18/2008 at 2:01 p.m. by killerrobotninja

it's funny you should say that. I've seriously been considering just randomly replacing one of the characters with a dinosaur hand puppet, in costume.

6/18/2008 at 2:02 p.m. by mom_of_one

Shadow puppets? I love shadow puppets!

6/18/2008 at 2:18 p.m. by erinlanphere

Do you really love shadow puppets, or are you just saying you love shadow puppets?

6/18/2008 at 2:19 p.m. by mom_of_one

I love shadow puppets......?

6/18/2008 at 2:33 p.m. by vote082

"Woah!" Neo style

6/18/2008 at 2:45 p.m. by davidmoon

Unfortunately, the Shadow Puppet Actors Union shut me down halfway through the production.

6/18/2008 at 4:37 p.m. by joec

This was fantastic!!!

6/18/2008 at 4:50 p.m. by Fink

i know everybody loves the "hey dirtbag" one you guys made and it was a good one, but i think this is alot better. one of the best videos of the contest thus far. fukin sweet special effects!

6/18/2008 at 5:07 p.m. by davidmoon

I agree ... dirtbag. I hoping to see you in this one Joe.

I think the alien chick needs to pull off her face in the last clip revealing Joe and a hardy "Hey, dirtbag!"

6/18/2008 at 8:23 p.m. by killerrobotninja

haha! THAT is a sweet idea

6/18/2008 at 9:55 p.m. by Cadillac

Hot girl, Awesome effects....very nice.

6/19/2008 at 11:54 a.m. by marie

This is totally my fav. I love when he's all like "whoa". Hee hee!

6/19/2008 at 1:40 p.m. by ThatsWhatSheSaid

Definitely the best one of this round. I still think KRN's earlier submission was a little bit better.

6/19/2008 at 2:02 p.m. by fiercedeityys

great production values and special effects! interesting twist, as well!

6/19/2008 at 2:18 p.m. by lobsterdouche

I love how the alien knows American vernacular. Or how Robert isn't phased by a girl in a santa suit. I really liked for serious though. Ska-dooosh!

6/19/2008 at 2:20 p.m. by ing

or how they couldn't even manage to have Scott wearing a black shirt like he was supposed to be? didn't know black shirts were such a rare commodity.

6/19/2008 at 2:36 p.m. by SomethingsAwry

Omg this is, like, my total fab fav in the WOOOORRRLLLLDDD. I totally, like, forgot to watch the other movies and just voted for THIS one LOL (I kno tats bad but OMG THIS ONE IS SOOOOO GOOD teehee)

6/19/2008 at 2:47 p.m. by killerrobotninja

hello haters, welcome to my video :)

6/19/2008 at 3:17 p.m. by vote082

SomethingsAwry.. "that sure is a creative comment. did you forget that this isn't a social comment board, but rather a place to comment on the movie?

Instead of trolling people who like this movie, maybe you could post something constructive."

Those are your words, SA, in case you forgot.

6/19/2008 at 3:26 p.m. by SomethingsAwry

I'm a very finicky person vote082, and I quite enjoy keeping people on their toes :D

Also, cute quote. Obviously you caught me before this contest made me cynical and bitter. I'm blushing a bit, even :p

Also, no offense KRN, I just don't even know, it's funny how your supporters have cried before about people getting family and friends to vote, when it's your family and friends voting lulz

6/19/2008 at 3:47 p.m. by killerrobotninja

understandable, but misdirected. i've been burned by this voting system as much as anyone else. relax, and enjoy the shows.

6/19/2008 at 4:01 p.m. by SomethingsAwry

ok, well, you're still a good director and editor, I just feel the need to be a bad guy against someone, and this movie is the only one that seems to stand a chance

it's my duty, almost

that being said, pretend like I didn't just say that, and let me get back into character ;)

6/19/2008 at 5:33 p.m. by trader

Why isn't Scott wearing a black shirt? I just watched it again and that stood out.

6/19/2008 at 6:22 p.m. by root

awesome!

6/19/2008 at 9:20 p.m. by jqutk

If you win you should get some girls in naughty santa outfits for the finale!

6/19/2008 at 9:37 p.m. by charliechaplin

I like your chances with the other competitors, since one is pointless and one is pushing 3 minutes. Got my vote.

6/19/2008 at 9:37 p.m. by charliechaplin

I forgot to say that I liked it!

6/19/2008 at 10:52 p.m. by bryceanderic

I'm diggin it, effects are a beast I have yet to tackle, well executed!

6/20/2008 at 4:07 a.m. by awazawazawaz

I've watched this clip three times just to see the greatness of the green eyes. Great sound effect with it.

6/20/2008 at 7:56 a.m. by killerrobotninja

haha, thanks... right before i rendered out the final edited movie, i was like "it would be really cool if her eyes glowed green at the end". Scifi is great to work an at 3 in the morning, cuz you're a little loopy already, just roll with it.

6/20/2008 at 1:59 p.m. by natejones

I like the Designer Sound FX- "Build up 30"

You get videocopilot's "The Bullet" training series?

It looks tight.

6/20/2008 at 2:01 p.m. by killerrobotninja

haha! Andrew Kramer is a sweet dude.

6/20/2008 at 2:41 p.m. by superdork

I think its great.I look forward to the next one.

6/20/2008 at 3:58 p.m. by chewie21

This is Awesome ! some great minds behind this one. Always enjoy watching your clips. Keep up the great work.

6/20/2008 at 9:03 p.m. by Ajacobs100

You got my vote, Wes!...I mean Les- I've been meaning to ask you, "those are all YOUR stores I see around town- Pay-Les! Awesome! You must be doing well, and really enjoy feet!

6/20/2008 at 11 p.m. by FungusRidden

As always, super entry, KRN! I'm so excited each time you showcase a new effect for us! The energy shot from the briefcase, and following aerial body hit, were amazing! Did you accomplish that digitally, or did you have to shoot the actual body-hit practically (i.e. with wires...?) Regardless, it came out very nicely and quite believable!

I do wish this cliff-hanger was placed earlier in the contest, though I understand that the story directions made it previously impossible. At this point, I think most potential cliff-hangers are going to force substantial exposition with limited time to share. I guess that's part of the unfortunate nature of the game... :<

Anyway, awesome job once again and beautiful, stylish entry like always!

PS: I'm disappointed that you didn't composite a black "HEY DIRTBAG" t-shirt on Scott. ;)

6/20/2008 at 11:03 p.m. by blesseddisciple

This clip is the best... best acting, best effects, best dialog.

Question: Is finding an Alien in a Santa suit attractive wrong? { : ^ />

6/21/2008 at 3:51 a.m. by bryceanderic

Touche, as the old adage goes, two dudes don't make a hot chick!

6/21/2008 at 9:56 a.m. by killerrobotninja

thanks fungus,

I came up with a fairly simple idea to make it look like brant got blasted backwards. I put him in front of the GS with a table right behind him, so he goes from standing normally to sitting back on the table and rolling onto his back.

so I keyed out the green normally and had do manually rotoscope the small area where the table supported him. effects planning is getting fun.

and as far as the cliffhanger being too late, I know exactly how I want to end it. I have a pretty ambitous idea, but if we can pull it off it could be awesome!

... I think...

6/21/2008 at 3:12 p.m. by RockstarProductions

HA! Good luck killerrobotninja. When I submit my master peice into the sixth chapter it will blow all of you away. It has a twist like no other. I admit this one you did is pretty good with effects, shot angle/positions, and contrast but I know that the story I just wrote is going to surpass all the films on Rootclip combined. Along with my acting and directing. Good Luck...

P.S. What kind of camera did you use to shoot all this?

6/21/2008 at 3:28 p.m. by killerrobotninja

cue the danger music... I think I just found an arch nemesis. "good luck killerrobotninja, mwa ha ha ha ha"

how did you write a finale when this chapter hasn't been decided yet?

6/21/2008 at 3:39 p.m. by root

This one has the best storyline. The other one looks really nice, but is too long and confusing.
If RockstarProductions hasn't won a previous chapter... you can't compete in the final one. Only previous chapter winners can compete in the final chapter (see the about page's faq).
So how much are you going to sell that world changing script for?

6/21/2008 at 4:04 p.m. by killerrobotninja

"argh! foiled again! I'll get you one day, killerrobotninja!!!"

6/21/2008 at 4:06 p.m. by RockstarProductions

I know you will win Killerrobotnija so I made a final based off yours

6/21/2008 at 4:10 p.m. by RockstarProductions

WTF!!!!!! That is soooooo gay! Dude screw this Im going to finish my 45 minute Drama. Screw you guys Im outa here. Good Luck Killerrobotnija, I hope you win

6/21/2008 at 6:48 p.m. by killerrobotninja

Thanks!
I'm really curious about your twist now.

6/21/2008 at 9:34 p.m. by FungusRidden

What a strangely cryptic fellow...

I do hope he returns. :< The suspense is murder.

6/22/2008 at 11:23 a.m. by RockstarProductions

Dont worry I'll be back for the next Root clip film.

6/22/2008 at 11:28 a.m. by RockstarProductions

If you guys are wondering about my twist Ill tell you.

But only after Killerrobotninja wins chapter 5.

6/23/2008 at 8:27 a.m. by jtempest

will never think of santa the same way again

6/23/2008 at 8:54 a.m. by jtaylor

Good job... again. I hope you get what you deserve and win this time.

6/23/2008 at 9:17 a.m. by thirteen

Wow! Best submission since this site started. Great work killerrobotninja.

6/23/2008 at 10:38 a.m. by davidmoon

It has great pace, story and it's a cliff hanger - I cannot wait to see what may happen next!

6/23/2008 at 11:15 a.m. by cdogg

Sweet!

6/23/2008 at 11:38 a.m. by xszakacs

Good clip because there is some actual plot development here. Past clips have been so focus on showing off what type of videos effects editors are capable of that plot has been incidental. Great job! PS, Wow, that hitman at the end was really hunky! Thought I saw him on America's Got Talent ...

6/23/2008 at 11:38 a.m. by trick

Santa got HOT! Nice work.

6/23/2008 at 11:44 a.m. by ldaddy

this movie was awesome, i love it u kicked his ass

6/23/2008 at noon by Bryce

congrats KRN you made a great video and deserve your win. looking forward to competing again with the next gen rootclip when we have judges and we can put this last minute vote surge business behind us ;) good luck in round 6

6/23/2008 at 12:11 p.m. by FungusRidden

Congrats on the win! I'm excited to see what you'll put together for Chapter 6. We've been watching and brainstorming how to move on from your cliffhanger, and the options are pretty overwhelming! Of course, only you know where it was really meant to go, but seeing three other potentially different directions should be exciting, too.

Best of luck!

6/23/2008 at 12:21 p.m. by killerrobotninja

Thanks everyone who voted!! I love you all!

6/23/2008 at 12:30 p.m. by joec

Way To Go Les!! Looking forward to the next clip. Congrats, You deserve it!!

6/23/2008 at 12:46 p.m. by allen

Congrats on the win!

6/23/2008 at 1:04 p.m. by davidmoon

Winner, winner ... chicken dinner!!!

6/23/2008 at 4:27 p.m. by jqutk

congrats, best one yet

6/23/2008 at 5:52 p.m. by jaytaylorthe1

When Robert's @$$ is getting blown, you can see a giant red splatter on the back wall, what is that?

6/23/2008 at 6:15 p.m. by killerrobotninja

i wanted the torture shed to have some evidence of past usage. It's digital gore, good eye.

6/24/2008 at 11:18 a.m. by jigsha

That was a great video! Loved the effects!

6/24/2008 at 11:55 a.m. by RockstarProductions

Hey one quick question KRN. What did you use to do the effects. After Affects or Motion. I have a effects guy that uses After Affects. But i never use effects becuase I mostly write Dramas and suspenses. Oh and congrats on the Win. Enjoy that $500 ; D

6/24/2008 at 12:13 p.m. by killerrobotninja

After Effects and Cinema 4d all the way. I'd love to delve into Motion or Shake, though.

You should sell your twist to one of the round winners.

6/24/2008 at 4:14 p.m. by root

Hey Rockstar... do you have any samples of your work?

6/26/2008 at 8:03 a.m. by jaytaylorthe1

Yeah Rockstar why don't you put your work where your mouth is. Cough up some videos!

7/11/2008 at 4:10 p.m. by peggyBABE

I love it!

9/10/2008 at 8:05 p.m. by MovieJunkie

Wow That was Sick! For a second I thought you were going to pull out the same old matrix bullet sequence, but no. Force field- I like it. The acting and effects were both very well done and believable. I even like the style (the mise en sce'ne) Very stylistic for an entry on rootclip. No offense to rootclip or anoyone else but hopefully krn didn't spend millions on this =) Anyhoo, I've liked pretty much everything you've submitted since the first one I saw which involved ( I believe) animation and a lamp or something. Great work, definately getting my vote.

9/10/2008 at 8:10 p.m. by MovieJunkie

OOOps, I guess I'm too late to vote. I must have been thrown off when I saw no judges opinions. What's with that? Seriously, none of the judges here at rootclip thought this clip was worthy of a win? Well atleast you pulled it out in true democratic fashion despite no love this round from the head honcho's. Congratulations!!!!!

9/10/2008 at 8:21 p.m. by MovieJunkie

Ok, I got it figured out. In my haste to see the new rootclip chapter I clicked on an old story not the new one. This explains why There are no judges, becuase there weren't any! Haha. So I guess I should lay off the moonshine or put down the crackpipe or just pay more attention to what I'm doing and rejoin the present! Hahaha. Anyway atleast I got to catch up on last round, the last two chapters that I never saw and my comments from the future should be amusing to anyone else taking a trip down memory lane.

Later.